I was walking around my new house. Suddenly,out of nowhere a trapdoor started to open up by itself. I didn't know what to do but all I knew was that I was scared.
I looked in the trapdoor and I saw a long swirly staircase. I start going down the stairs one by one very slowly. Suddenly,I see big red eyes staring at me.
I tried to turn around but my legs wouldn't let me.I could hear my heart beating. I finally found the light switch and flicked on. It was just monkeys, dogs and guinea pigs. I felt relieved but I was still wondering why they had glowing red eyes.
They were so cute so I went up and tried to pat one. They growled at me then bit me. Ouch that hurt more than usual. I knew these animals weren't nice.
Somebody came the next day to pick up the animals and I was really glad. I definitely didn't want to see them again.
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Claire and Kelsey
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ReplyDeleteyour story was great! I loved reading it you put alot of effort into that. i liked your idea of the animal room!!!!
ReplyDeleteFrom Katerina!
That is a awesome story!!! I love it!!! I have a guinea pig and when he bits it does hurt more than you would think it would
ReplyDeleteFrances
Room 12
cool story, I like how you used interesting words!
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