The velvet sky glistened in the eerie night, as Jason , Piper and Leo tramped down to the basement. Trying to figure out what an suspicious key would unlock. When Piper accidentally tripped and slammed against the cement wall. Suddenly a bright and colourful portal appeared and a whirring tone echoed in the darkness. They stared at it amused and in a trance trudged to it stiffly. They blacked out. When they woke up in a daze...
RENZO AND JANUEK
Room 10 have just started this blog and we are learning how to use it correctly.
Some of our work will be unedited and may contain some mistakes.
Please be patient with us and celebrate our successes and not our mistakes.
Some of our work will be unedited and may contain some mistakes.
Please be patient with us and celebrate our successes and not our mistakes.
Monday, 26 March 2012
The cellar of darkness-part 1
I shot down the drive way like a puma chasing its prey."I must catch the mysteriously masked man. It all stared when I was guarding the bank on Salary ST when a man jumped out of the corner with a club and knock me out 3 hours later the man was on the run with a bag of all the gold and diamonds in the bank and that's what happened so far mawwww~haaaaa...........
The story continues by SAM and Thomas
The story continues by SAM and Thomas
The Cellar
I was staring straight at it. I reached out with a trembling hand. My hand made contact with the cold metal of the handle. I tried the handle but it was locked. I looked frantically around. I saw a glint of gold and there it was... the key!! I grabbed it and thrusted it into the key hole. The door creaked open and I walked in I could not believe my eyes...
By Matt and Tommy
By Matt and Tommy
The Secretive Door
It was cold day at the theater. The theatre was going to lock up for the night. Mr Stoker the night manager was waiting at the door. 'Where is he' he said. A thin man walked next to him "Mr Stoker" he said. "detective' Mr Stoker cried. "I here there's this door". "Yes employers are missing when they go in the door" Mr Stoker said. "Then lets take a look" said the thin man and they walked in the theatre. They came to a door and looked around the theatre Mr Stoker told the detective that the door was in the cellar. "Interesting' said the detective. They looked around and found the door it was carved in the stone. It's hinges were rusty and the door looked battered up. Mr Stoker looked up at the detective. "Shall we' the detective said. "You go" Mr Stoker said trembling and looking rather pale. The detective looked up and went through the door. "Mr Stoker I think you should come in" When Mr Stoker looked inside there was a party going on with all his employs. Mr Stoker looked up and said thankyou but the detective was gone, melted in darkeness...
By Astin
By Astin
THE ROOM OF THE CAVE!
I went to the beach at sun set, I know I am not supposed to I just could not help my self the caves darken as you go down and the sun pollutes the sky with orange and reddish brown I looked up the sun smiled at its reflection in the water today I thought I would go in the caves as the feeling of the ground changed. It felt wooden as I just managed to shape out a door it had old hunches with sea weed coating the ground I had a feeling that someone has all ready been here I felt a chill going up my spine it didn't feel that cold, I could not go back. I was so far in and I refused to turn around what if it is a breath of an animal. I Continued into the cave. Suddenly, I could see blackness blanketing the cave that is the last time I will ever go there!
BY TYLER
BY TYLER
The Secret Cellar on the Moon-Part 1
*BANG BANG* Went the sound of the gun...in the TV actually, oh I wish i could land myself in these TV tales. Like The Secret Cellar on the moon. If you don't know what it is about then it is about a spaceman named Xephos, he went to the moon and found a secret cellar! He was forced to see a piece of paper, he picked it up and read out, "turn around"... He turned around and saw aliens!!! He ran out of the cellar into his spaceship and he hit the launch button and sat down on his chair "phew" he sighed. He spun around on his chair and was surprised to see..... THE ALIENS!!!
THE END!
By Joseph & William
THE END!
By Joseph & William
The Mysterious Door
I was walking around my new house. Suddenly,out of nowhere a trapdoor started to open up by itself. I didn't know what to do but all I knew was that I was scared.
I looked in the trapdoor and I saw a long swirly staircase. I start going down the stairs one by one very slowly. Suddenly,I see big red eyes staring at me.
I tried to turn around but my legs wouldn't let me.I could hear my heart beating. I finally found the light switch and flicked on. It was just monkeys, dogs and guinea pigs. I felt relieved but I was still wondering why they had glowing red eyes.
They were so cute so I went up and tried to pat one. They growled at me then bit me. Ouch that hurt more than usual. I knew these animals weren't nice.
Somebody came the next day to pick up the animals and I was really glad. I definitely didn't want to see them again.
By
Claire and Kelsey
I looked in the trapdoor and I saw a long swirly staircase. I start going down the stairs one by one very slowly. Suddenly,I see big red eyes staring at me.
I tried to turn around but my legs wouldn't let me.I could hear my heart beating. I finally found the light switch and flicked on. It was just monkeys, dogs and guinea pigs. I felt relieved but I was still wondering why they had glowing red eyes.
They were so cute so I went up and tried to pat one. They growled at me then bit me. Ouch that hurt more than usual. I knew these animals weren't nice.
Somebody came the next day to pick up the animals and I was really glad. I definitely didn't want to see them again.
By
Claire and Kelsey
The mysterious room at Hogwarts
It was Christmas day at Hogwarts Harry,Ron and Hermione were in the common room and then suddenly the fire went out and a secret passage appeared.They opened the door and there was a dark,misty passage and then bang the door shut behind them.They jogged through the passage and then ka-pow lights turned on when they got to the end all of them fell down into the worst place you could think of Snape's office. Hermione said to harry "is that your mum".Ron was going through Snape's secert cupboard when Snape came in with a tattoo of the DARK MARK!!!!! Harry SCREAMED and the others did to and then Snape shouted"GET OUT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!".Ron simply did a spell that would change you into a frog. They hurried out . They went to Dumbledore's office when they got there they told him about Snape and the dark mark on his arm.Dumbledore went to Snape's office and fired him from Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry.......
By Catherine and Ethan
By Catherine and Ethan
The hidden cellar
Once upon a time there was a little girl called emily.She was running around the field near her Aunties place she was playing hide and seek and then saw a hiding place there was something shimmering in the distance. she was looking at a key it was dusty and old and dirty! Emily ran to her Aunties castle and told her to tell her what this key is for! Her Aunty ingnored her and looked at a door, which is unfamiliar. She stepped closer to the door and on the top of the door there was a code! Emily glaced at the key one more time and saw a code on the top of the key which had the same numbers as the door. She tried to put the key in the door the key fitted perfectly! and with a click the door simply opened.She looked at the cold and damp room with bones,blood and floating instrutments and saw ghosts floating everywhere.emily slammed the door and ran out and left the key broken and dirty key was hidden by the ghosts. She told herself and said Im not going to see that door again!
The Dusty Book- Part 1
Hello, my name is Jake. I am a marine biologist. I have short blond hair and am quite short. I have worked on marine biology for 4 years. I went to the private library at the end of the street which is owned by my friend Chyna. I was looking for a book about the Amazon because I was studying the South American Piranhas. I looked in the marine corner I eyed a dusty old book in the corner of an old looking pine bookshelf. It had the words a guide of the amazon river, it was perfect. I slowly started to pull the book out when a section of the bookshelf opened with a creak. I peered inside and took one step in. The door quickly slammed behind me. It was pitch black apart from the flicker of a candle in the corner. My eyes quickly adjusted to the dark. There were various disturbing things including a shunken head and a skull of a human. there was a mysterious voice coming from the candle. I heard footsteps coming closer and closer. Then the mysterious voice said "serve me or die!". The door quickly slid open behind me and I rushed out. But little did I know, he was coming to get me...
By Aisling and Samantha
By Aisling and Samantha
The D.Zs
The night seemed to silence as I woke up. Me and my family were staying at a rented house at the top of a mountain.
It was the middle of the night and something had woken me up. It seemed to be music but it was actually kind of catchy. I crept out of bed and got my torch. Following the sound of the music I sneaked downstairs. I soon found the music was coming from under the rug that I was standing on.
Minutes later I found out that a funny looking trap door was underneath the rug. I opened it up and crept down. The stairs creaked. Suddenly the music changed, Party rock anthem was playing. There was a hallway with hundreds of radio speakers. This was pretty cool.
Later on the hallway came to a stop and around the corner there was... DANCING ZOMBIES!!!
I screamed so loud that every single zombie stopped and stared some even looked sad. I explained to them that I wasn't screaming because of them, I was screaming because it was my favourite singer playing, JUSTIN BIEBER!! They asked me if I wanted to dance with them. I said yes.
97 years later I was a lifeless but undead dancing zombie!!!
by NAYELI and AIMEE!
It was the middle of the night and something had woken me up. It seemed to be music but it was actually kind of catchy. I crept out of bed and got my torch. Following the sound of the music I sneaked downstairs. I soon found the music was coming from under the rug that I was standing on.
Minutes later I found out that a funny looking trap door was underneath the rug. I opened it up and crept down. The stairs creaked. Suddenly the music changed, Party rock anthem was playing. There was a hallway with hundreds of radio speakers. This was pretty cool.
Later on the hallway came to a stop and around the corner there was... DANCING ZOMBIES!!!
I screamed so loud that every single zombie stopped and stared some even looked sad. I explained to them that I wasn't screaming because of them, I was screaming because it was my favourite singer playing, JUSTIN BIEBER!! They asked me if I wanted to dance with them. I said yes.
97 years later I was a lifeless but undead dancing zombie!!!
by NAYELI and AIMEE!
The Seceret room of Gold
Kelly knocked on her grandparents door and waited for them to come. Kelly came inside with nothing to do so her grandma said she could help her with the washing then vacuum the floor. Kelly had finished helping her grandmother with the washing. So she got out the vacuum cleaner to clean the floor. As Kelly was coming across to the cupboard she tripped on an old rug. Kelly saw a bronze key peeking out under the rug. Kelly picked the key up and read the engravings on it. It said secret room on it. Kelly saw a string at the back of the vacuum cleaning cupboard. She pulled the string and an underground set of stairs appeared leading to big bronze door. she used the key to open the door and in the secret room she saw her grandfather cleaning pure Gold trophies and medals. Her grandfather gasped and explained to Kelly that these treasures belonged to her great grandfather the won lots of Olympic games. Kelly's grandfather said that he kept them in this room so the museum wouldn't take them. Kelly was amazed at all the gold medals and trophies. Kelly's grandfather gave here a small trophy saying to the first person who found this room. Kelly asked "Shouldn't it be awarded to you?" and he said "When I was young my dad told me about it so you deserve it."
By Grace Tulloch and Katerina Lagoutaris
By Grace Tulloch and Katerina Lagoutaris
Secret Room
Today we are writing stories about secret rooms.
Monday, 12 March 2012
Welcome Class of 2012
Now that you are able to get into our class blog you will see that there is opportunity to discuss things that we are doing in class with your parents.
Talk to someone tonight about our blog and show them it. It doesn't have any of our current work on it yet, but will soon!
Mrs Taylor
Talk to someone tonight about our blog and show them it. It doesn't have any of our current work on it yet, but will soon!
Mrs Taylor
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